Devil Girl Diaries 5 – (Subway Surprise)


Every man has that one unforgettable woman that will haunt him until his final day; the girl that got away. Allie detested television, vanilla ice cream, and missionary. She explored the depths of her sexuality; while I discovered the heights of my pain. My muse had a nickname. I called her Devil Girl. I write these words to ease my sorrows. My name is Andrew.

This is our story.


the 1 train pulled into the station

bringing a wind with it

lifting Devil Girl’s skirt to heaven

exposing her bare derrière

sending my poor heart to hell

so much for the shy girl next door

Allie boarded the train

followed by a horde of men

I entered through another door

she clutched a metal bar

a construction worker stood behind her

she pressed her butt into his groin

his face reacted with surprise

the gentle rocking of the train

did the rest

breathless, angry, confused

I wanted to rip them apart

yet, I wanted to see more

what was wrong with me

she looked over her shoulder

at the brute behind her

he moved closer to her

pushing against her white skirt

rubbing himself against my Allie

I had to stop it

my feet refused to move

my aroused groin betrayed me

what the…..

oh you confuse me Devil Girl

You already know the drill, to be continued.


86 thoughts on “Devil Girl Diaries 5 – (Subway Surprise)

  1. I enjoy your ability to create erotic writing without stepping over the vulgarity line. You keep people on the end of their chair wanting more. This requires great talent. Well done.


  2. Such a tease. Devil girl sounds like she secretly had self esteem issues. Always needing to be wanted, to be desired and to flaunt it in front of you, knowing that you loved her. In a way, I’m beginning to feel sorry for Devil girl. And to think she lost out on someone special like you.

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    1. Always needing to be on showcase. Oh, and there was no watching tv with her. And the complaining oh, you’re writing again. If I do write this as a novel, I will have a full 3D characxter to write about. Probably would be my easiest book to write. Thanks for stoping by Meg.

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                    1. I don’t always do, but when I do, I just type in there Twitter handle in the search and go from there. I rarely scroll through my feed. All my closest friend are in DM and I click on there feed from there.

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  3. Oh my!!! Wow! This was so good! :). I ask that same question all the time! “What’s wrong with me!” Why is it our fantasies are so naughty it makes us question if we are normal! πŸ™‚ this one may be my favorite of Devilish Girl! πŸ™‚

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    1. Haha. Thanks for saying that. It doesn make people question their fantasies. Thanks for saying that. I think fantasies are okay as long as both are interested. If one person is forcing their fantasies on the other it isn’t the same. Thanks for reading.


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