Hola everyone. I am thrilled to post my second duet with my wonderful muse/mentor Nandita Yata of the beautiful blog A Tangle Of Weeds.
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Love Untold (A Duet)
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The man of my dreams wears Hilfiger in navy and white
He kills it with his James Bond look, suave, classy and bright
Hugo Boss lingers on his pulses so delicate and light
He smells like the tropics in trance, my olfactory delight
The woman of my dreams dresses in elegance and style
We enter the nouveau restaurant and every man’s beguiled
Heads continue turning as she is walking down the aisle
Everyone wants what I have, and that just makes me smile
When we go out, the man of my dreams opens doors for me
He leads me by the hand, he is the epitome of chivalry
He pulls the chair, seats me before making himself easy
Then says “how would you like to satisfy your palate, My Lady?”
At the table she discovers new silver earrings in her glass
For I will do everything I can to never let the Honeymoon pass
My beloved likes mischievous gentlemen with an accent of class
So I pull her chairs, hold her doors, and smack her in the ass
He beckons to the waiter who greets us with a beaming smile
“The finest Chardonnay you have, please bring it in a little while”
Are your feet hurting with the killer heels you have on, he asks
Oh but I only just put them in the car I say, he giggles and basks
I promise to massage her feet, and her favorite songs I will sing
Nandita is so easy to love, for my special lady I will do anything
As I sip my wine I notice I am with the most gorgeous in the room
We are the perfect pair, the blushing bride and the lucky groom
I say a quick silent prayer as Andrew locks his tender gaze into mine
Let eternity imprint itself upon our moments so beautifully divine
Even the stars are swooning in anticipation of the magic to unfold
As he serenades me, the moon blesses this story of our love untold
Violinists come to play their sweet strings cause it’s time for romance
She reciprocates batting her lovely lashes as our hearts sing and dance
The moon accompanies us on our walk home as the night ends in harmony
Cause I was born to love only her, and she was born to love only me
Beautiful Andrew and Nandita. You guys are a powerhouse of poetic pose! Have a lovely evening. 😀Amanda
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Thank you so much Amanda. Appreciate that. You too.
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Thank you Amanda for your lovely words
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My pleasure, Nandita. I’ve started following your blog too, I enjoyed it so much.
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I’m happy to hear that. I hope I will not disappoint you. Thanks again😀.
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Loved this!❤️❤️❤️
You guys are one lucky couple! 😀
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You are very sweet. Thank you for saying that.
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Thanks so much Tanishq 😀😁❤️
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As it should be. . Stunning piece! !
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Appreciate that Lity. Thank you.
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You r welcome.
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Wow! You guys are simply amazing! Cheers to both of you😊😊😊
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You made me so happy. Thanks for saying that. Appreciate it
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Thanks a lot Sona
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Perfection!
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Thank you so much Isha. Appreciate that.
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not untold anymore..a perfect date 🙂
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Thanks so much for your kind words. They are appreciated.
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Beautiful post 😊
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Thanks so much
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beautiful
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Thank you
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So lovely! What a wonderful dance between such wonderful people. I love these duets and hope there will be more.
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Aaaaw thank you for sating that. Your words bring me joy. Thanks so much.
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Beautifully done!! 🙂
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Happy that you think so. You are always so kind. Thank you
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My pleasure truly 🙂
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This so beautiful… perfectly in sync.
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Thank you. That was a great description for me and Nandita – perfectly in sync. Thanks so much for your. read and comments.
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😊 All the best to both of u for future duets😛. God bless
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Thanks for the encouraging words. We appreciate it. Thanks.
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Happy you enjoyed our offering of love. Thanks so much.
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Two creative writer’s hearts braided poetic love keeping, me, the readers closer and closer to my laptop screen. Detail paragraph strands were enough to blend the story to the very end. Loved it. Thank you for the short escape from my reality.
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Thank you for your kind comments. They are greatly appreciated. We had a lot of fun writing it. Thanks.
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Like my partner says, this was an absolute pleasure. So happy you read it the way you did. Thank you so much
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This strikes a chord to take me back
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Thank you for saying that Derrick. Mucho appreciated.
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This is really beautiful😘😘😘
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Thank you so much,
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Wow!! …couldn’t stop smiling! Beautiful!!
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You are very kind. Happy to make you smile. Thanks for the read and sweet comments.
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Wonderful, wonderful piece.🔥
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Mucho appreciated. Thank you so much,
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You are very welcome.:)
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Bless you two.
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I believe she will answer you a little later, but thank you from both of us. We appreciate your words and support.
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Thank you for always supporting us, Ismail. May God bless you
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You are very good. Wish you happiness.
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You are sweet to say that
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A wonderful dance between writers. 🙂
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Thanks for your kind words. It feels wonderful dancing with Nandita. Like a dream come true. Thank you always for your support.
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Happy you enjoyed our love dance. Thanks a lot.
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You’re welcome.
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Reblogged this on The Militant Negro™.
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Thank you so much for the reblog. We appreciate the kind gesture.
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You’re welcome, and enjoy your Wednesday.
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Thanks. Please have a great Wednesday full of sunshine and smiles.
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Wonderful! It’s so seamless, it feels like one poet writing two parts! Swooningly romantic, you two! 😍
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You made me smile Meg. Thank you for the read and kind words.
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Thank you Meg…thats a wonderful comment..
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My pleasure!
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Hello, thanks for reaching out to me and thank you for your kind offer. However, my poems and writings are solely for the purpose of self expression and to demonstrate my devotion to my beloved. If at any point you would be interested in paying me to publish my writing, then I would be interested in talking. Otherwise, not interested. Thanks and have a good day.
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Deep Sigh ✨✨✨
You two produce words that make my heart sing. I am unbelievably lucky to completely relate to this piece because I have found my love untold. BRAVO!!!❤️❤️❤️
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Thank you so much for this beautiful comment. Love is wonderful. I hope yours will always glow. Thank you.
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Thank you for the lovely words about us. We will continue to love each other so much that we hope the song in our hearts percolate to other hearts.. and so happy for your love too.
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Sorry, mine is award free blog. Time doesn’t allow me to participate. Thanks for thinking of me.
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no problem, 🙂
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A sweet piece, Kids.
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Thank you so much.
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Wow, you too duet to perfection, no less! it’s seamlessly written. Well done, both of you! 🙂
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Joy, I am so happy that you liked this. I am certain Nandita will be delighted as well. Thank you so much for your kind words. They are appreciated.
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Thank you Joy for your consistent support. So happy you liked our love waltz. 😊
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This line: My beloved likes mischievous gentlemen with an accent of class
So I pull her chairs, hold her doors, and smack her in the ass….pure perfection. Such a beautiful poem from you both and really well written!
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Delighted that you liked that line and our duet. Thank you so much for your comments. They are greatly appreciated.
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Thank you so much Laura. I really do like mischievous classy men and Andrew knows me so well. And he is a mischievous classy gentleman. This poem is special to both of us and I’m happy you enjoyed it.
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Perfect duet, you two. My favorite line: ‘even the stars are swooning in anticipation of the magic to unfold.’ I wish more people believed in magic.
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Linda, we wish more people believed in magic as well. Love can be so magical. As for that line in the duet Nandita came up with a wonderful line, as she always does. Thank you for your kind words.
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My pleasure! Always love to read amazing poetry.
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You are too kind.
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Thank you for your lovely comment. Like my partner says, love is indeed magical and we both believe in magic. Happy to see you do too. Thanks again for your compliment.
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My pleasure!
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Very Lovely.
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Thank you John. Appreciate it.
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🙂
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Wonderful, especially loving the last line… so romantic. 😊
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Delighted that you enjoyed our duet. Yeah, that last night meant a lot to us. Thank you for reading and for your words.
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Being a writer is like being a father, something that you will have to prove to yourself every day. Not always the way to the first book, or text published on a blog, is upholstered with tatters of writer’s skin.
I feel that you are ready to write your first book, the second even the third. You can only write your first book once, you will never go through that innocence again.
Congratulations. I invite you to visit my blog and read the most recent entry entitled “The smell of fear”.
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Thank you. I will.
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What a lovely, selective share. A beautiful and glamorous love stroll., it is
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Aw that is so sweet of you to say. Happy you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading.
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A sweet serenade is made from: one heart to another heart, from lover to lover, from together to together, from forever to forever.
Thank you!
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What a great comment. Thank you so much for sharing these thoughts with us. I am certain my Nandita will be happy when she reads them on the other side of the world. Thank you.
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Both have inspired any thoughts I’ve had. 😀
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Thank you
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The two of you write so well together. Simply awesome!
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Thank you so much for saying that. When there is chemistry, it makes things so much easier. Appreciate your words.
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A duet dressed to thrill.
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You always make me laugh. Thank you. Happy you enjoyed our duet.
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Gorgeous! Romancing love … You two are wonderful!
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Aaaw, it’s my other half that makes things wonderful. Thank you.
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You are welcome. Oh… i know!sometimes miracles happen.
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Love always finds a way. Gracias.
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de nada! you know my Spanish is limited 🙂
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Yeah, but you often add a Latin flavor to your writing. And you do it well.
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Gracias😊
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Mesmerizing prose. I let myself get lost in the loveliness of the moments.
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Thank you for saying that. We appreciate your kind words of encouragement. Thanks.
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Another truly remarkable poem! I love reading the poems that you share and they are filled with so much emotion!
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You are always so sweet. Thank you for your generous compliments. Nandita and I appreciate it.
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You are more than welcome!!
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
LOVELY DUET! 🙂 YOU TWO SING WELL TOGETHER!
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Thanks so much John.
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My pleasure.
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Romantic. Sensual. Relaxing. Soothing. As it should be between a man and a woman. Being a newlywed myself, I can relate!😉😊😎
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Delighted that you think so. We had so much fun writing this poem. It really showed so much of our personalities. Thanks for the read and comments.
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Lovely poetry, you two were made for each other!
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That Is sweet of you to say that. Nandita and I feel the exact Same way. Thank you for the read and kind words. You have made me and my lovely lady so happy.
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I’m so happy to hear it. You both seem like such wonderful souls. Enjoy each other forever!
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That is so sweet. Thank you. I know my Nandita will be pleased to see your comments.
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Thank you so much
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You’re very welcome
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beautiful duet – simply like a melody…
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Happy that you think so. Thanks so much
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I feel like I’ve been there, in that restaurant and seen you, guys :))
the language is excellent ❤️❤️❤️
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How nice of you to say so, Ray. You are so sweet. Thank you for your support and your kind words of course.
Please accept these two roses from us, it’s from the same restaurant I daresay 🌹🌹🌹😜😜😜😎😎😎
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Wakey wakey 😊 ❤️❤️❤️
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Hola. Getting out of bed now. ❤ ❤ ❤
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Good morning my dearest and nearest love. I missed you so much. I hope you slept well. Te amo tanto ❤️❤️❤️
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Yes I did. How did you sleep? Yo te amo tanto tanto tanto.
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That is so sweet. After we hung up that is all I did. Day dream thoughts of that airport meet where we first hug.
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Lol. A little early for that Honey.
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I thought you liked early mornings…lol
I meant other sweet things, darling.
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LOL. I do. I do. Sorry, then it was me who has the dirty mind for even going there. How is the weather? you have mad mucho rain lately
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Pleasant weather here. Going to dinner. 7:30. I posted twice already. Oh and a little change in case you notice
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Ok I will read. A little change? You have me curious.
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So did you notice the change?
Oh and I’m going for dinner, the one I told you about. 7:30.
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NYM
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The moment I started sipping coffee, everything came into place. Enjoy the dinner Baby, you do need to go out more. I love you so much
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Will miss you. I love you too, much much. 😂
Go and read last night now. Sparta!!!
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I will lol
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Leaving now for the dinner party. Please feel free to write/call ok. Miss you. Love you.
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I wouldn’t dare Amor. I will miss you and wait patiently as you so often do.
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I dedicated SPF’s latest to you.
Write to me
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Okay.
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Read Reluctant Poets comment on my “The Key”. Say some thing nice to him about us ok
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Besos. I am missing you so badly. Added my two centavos.
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Hate mail has resumed
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Seriously. Unnamd, right?
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Yes. Someone called Jake. But he admitted he is a hater.
Will tell you more later
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ok
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Great
Hope you had a good time
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in a few
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all ok
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ok
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Chuck sent me the sweetest email. I will cut and paste it and send to you.
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Enjoy the dinner. The change is “promising to meet tonight.” Right? I don’t see any other
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So romantic! This is what is love 😍
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Appreciate it Winnie. Thanks
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You’re welcome!
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lovely
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Glad you enjoyed our tango. Thank you so much
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it was superb!
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Why didn’t you say so the first time you commented?
Sorry, I have a terrible sense of humor. 😂Thanks so much, Joseph. Appreciate it.
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lol 😉
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I didn’t want this to end. I could read this forever. Oh, my.
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Thank you. You are too sweet. Thanks for reading.
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Such a beautiful write-up!!
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Delighted that you liked it. Thanks for reading.
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A sweet poem by two people in the first flushes of love in a relationship. I know you aren’t together anymore, but even the taste of such a moment is worth the heartbreak that follows. When your soul touches the heights, it’s a cherished memory never to be forgotten. xo (And by the way, can I just say how excited I am for you on the new move to Florida?! How wonderful!!)
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Happy you enjoyed this poem. It was written during the height of our romance.
Thank you for your gorgeous words of appreciation.
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❤
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Thanks Nandita
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You write so beautifully Thank You
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I am grateful for your beautiful comment and appreciation. Thank you so much for your kind words.
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