Ballet of Poetry
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With a pirouette of personification
She ignited her carousel of fantasy
As slow enchanting adagio verses
Freed me from my loveless tragédie
Under my spotlight ballon rhymes
Made my heart skip a graceful beat
With her assemblé rhymes floating
She slowly swept me off of my feet
Who could resist such choreography
For her entrée had me from the start
When my prima ballerina performed
A ballet of poetry in my aching heart
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Photo from Google Images.
Ontroerend mooi
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Thank you
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Beautiful artistry… you are a legendary poet
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Flattered by your kind words. Happy you liked this.
Sorry, for the delay in my response. Two long back to back vacations have me months behind in answering comments. Apprecisate your words.
Thanks for stopping by to read and comment.
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beautiful! ❤
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Very happy that you think so. Thank you for reading and your words.
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Have you always written poetry, A? Xx
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Look at what I found here? Still going through comments. No, I started writing poetry with that first poem you read that.
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I know that now baby. Funny how much i know now…i was crushing a bit there
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LOL . Thankfully, you aren’t crushing anyore. Ahem.
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Right… You are right about that. This is definitely NOT a crush
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I thought so
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♥
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xoxo
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♥
Missed you.
Much more for you today
Filakia
Xx
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Not near translate. Filakia?
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Kisses. I wrote it in English characters. Google gets confused! 😂
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LOL Got it now
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It’s actually probably the exact translation of besitos. Kiss is Filí and little kisses, filakia.
I could teach you more Greek if you want, lol. I presume filthy dirty words will be first
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Yes, I have a knack for learning those quickly.
When I first read you were going to teach me Greek, anal automatically came to mind.
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Wow
Your mind is a porno
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LOL . Teach me Greek. But it has to be in letters I understand,.
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Obviously. I am not up for teaching anyone the Greek alphabet, it’s a nightmare.
What do you want to know?
Well you know “agapi” it just means love, as a term of endearment or as the actual meaning of the word
I don’t think I’ve said anything else so far.
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Is it pronounced as it is written?
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The stress is on the second syllable. And the ‘g’ isn’t really a hard ‘g’ as we say in English. It’s more back of the throat. Hard to explain. You could probably listen to it with the lovely Google translate lady’s voice
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When we speak on phone you will tell me
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I’ll tell you whatever you want.
I have to go for a little while. Not long
With love
❤️
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I am going to try to get some sleep. Later.
Besitos
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Sleep well. A soft kiss
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Finally up. Slept 8 hours 15 minutes combined.
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Perfect. Emailed you but no rush.
Happy heartbeats that you’re here
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Emailed back, You will like it, I think
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Will I now…
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I think so
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Well I did.
I am impulsively responding as we speak.
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Cool beans
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Hilarious
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LOL
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Thank you so . uch for the reblog. Appreciate your kind gesture.
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Beautiful Poetry
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Appreciate that. Thank you so much. I was away for a month, thus the delay in my reply. Thank you for stopping by.
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There’s no other option except stopping by a great poetry of yearning desire…
Me too is a poet owning a blog…
skpoetrydot.wordpress.com
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Thank you for the visit and your very kind words. Let’s follow one another. And we can share thoughts. Thanks for your kind words.
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Very nice! Great job! 🙂
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Appreciate the read and lovely words. Thank you.
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Beautiful!
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Very happy that you think so. Thank you for reading.
Soryy, for the delay in my response. I was away for a month. Thanks
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very beautiful indeed. A picture of dance forms in the mind as you read the words. well done.
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I was away for several weeks and am now catching up to my older comments.
Thankl you very much for your read and the lovely comments. So appreciate it
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This flows so well. Beautifully written!
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Flattered that you think so.
Thank you for reading and for your very kind words.
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Hmm memories for me, a dancer I once knew. And struggle to forget.
Good job as always.
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Laughing, Hopoe it’s good memories.
Where are you my friend
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Bitterwseet!
I’m a bit AWOL on wp lately just been working a lot, not a ton of time to even think creative 😐 but I’ll be back 👍
How u doing?
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Doing okay even thought I was in an accidnet on Thanksgiving. A little sore, but still very inspired.
Wish you the best holiday season
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All the best, you too 👍
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Thanks
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This is so beautiful! ♥️
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Very flattered that you think so. Thank you so much for taking the time out to read and comment.
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It was an absolute pleasure 🙂
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Very nice, I love the last two lines.
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Thank you so much for taking the time out to read and comment.
Happy that you liked those lines, they were my favorites as well.
Thank you.
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‘She ignited her carousel of fantasy’ is such a vivid image to me. Though, I think the whole poem is very vivid – it’s a beautiful poem
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Happy you liked this. Thank you so mucn for reading
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i really like the choice of your words. Do review my poetry on http://www.rhymingart.com
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I think this is greatly job, and nicely penned. Cheers and peace to you.
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Very happy that you think so. Thank you so much for reading.
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Wow…I really liked that.
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Very flattered. Thank you so much for reading.
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to me this poem was all about adagio … that word adagio … i’m in love with it
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I like that word as well. I had to find a way to insert it in this poetry write.
Thank you for reading and for sharing your thoughts.
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wow, I love this.
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Very happy that you do. Thank you so much for reading and for your comment.
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Love this!
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Thank you so. much for reading and sharing your thoughts
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Very nice
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Thank you so much for reading, Appreciate it.
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Absolutely beautiful. Great word choices and wonderful ending.
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Thank you so much, Appreciate your kind words. You are very kind.
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Reblogged this on Change The Code.
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Thank you so much for the kind gesture of the reblog. I appreciate your kindness.
Sorry for the delay in my response. I was vacationing for a month.
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My pleasure!
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Stunning poem. Thanks for sharing! 🙂
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Thank you for taking the time out to read. Appreciate your wonderful comments. Thanks.
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My pleasure
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Breathtaking!
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Very happy that you think so. Thank you so much.
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👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽
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Thanks
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Reblogged this on Confessions Of A Ballet Fuck Up.
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Very grateful you think this poem was worthy of being reblogged. Thank you so muich for the kind gesture of support.
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No problem. It made me feel something.
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Very flattered. Thank you.
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Flawlessly put. You have a way with words my friend!
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Very flattered by your kind words.
Thank you for reading
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Amazing!! I loved it so much!
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Happy that you did. Very grateful for you taking the time out to read and comment. Thank you.
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I love this poem. I write a lot of poems on my site on here, too. I add 6 a week and 6 lyrics, too. I really enjoyed your work, I subscribed, too.
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Thank you for reading and for your words. As soon as I am well, I will drop by your blog.
Again, thanks
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Thank you, get well soon!
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Thanks
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Hi!! You’re a beautiful writer!! So powerful words!
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Thank you very much for reading and for your very kind words.
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I’d be glad if you’d just read few of the poems on my blog. It would make my day!😄
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I will.
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Thank you so much!
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Your link doesn’t work.
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I guess now it does! Thank you so much!
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No it doesn’t my friend
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I’ll have to correct it. Sorry for the trouble😅
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Don’t worry. Let me know when you fix it.
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I guess it works now😅😅
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Yesw it does.
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Beautiful word choices, and stunning imagery.
A favourite of the ones I have read on this site.
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Very flattered. Thank you for your very kind words. Appreciate it.
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As a dancer myself, I could see the dance in front of me as I read the poem.. do check out my blog
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Very grateful for your wonderful words. Appreciate it. Thank you so much.
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This made me smile☺️
Great work!
Please visit my blog at: https://feelthe.poetry.blog/2018/11/18/finding-nepenthe/
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Happy to make you smile. I will drop by your blog. Thanks
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You’re very welcome
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Thank you for reading. I will visit your blog as soon as I can
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Beautiful!
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I would like to thank you for taking the time out to stop my blog read posts and leave your lovely comments. It is greatly appreciated.
I will be visiting you my friend . – Drew
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I’m happy that I found your site! Looking forward to more and more of your work!
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You are very kind. Thank you.
It will be great reading one another and exchanging ideas.
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Indeed!
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Loved it. Beautiful !
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Grateful that you think so. Thank you so much for your kind words.
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Ballet – poetry in motion!
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Smiling. Thank you for your very kind words. Appreciate your head and comment.
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Wonderful. ❤
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Thankl you so much. I appreciate your read and comment.
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Is it supposed to be “balloon”?
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Yeah.
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