
you
You are the elegance of a whisper
The deep longing in my verse
The passion of a first kiss
The crescendo of a sigh
You are a garden of fantasies
An arrangement of dreams
The bloom of my smile
A bouquet of sunsets
You are the reason I breathe
The exhale of my balladry
You are a sonnet of love
A scent of poetry
On form with this one Drew. I’m not sure how you can write so much about love and still keep it original and fresh. This poem had great heart to it. 😊
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Veery flattered and sefriously so happy. Keeping it fresh can be difficult, but for me, a man not currently in love with anyone, well, that was of a challenge.
Delighted that you appreciated this poem. Thankful for your words and read.
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You’re welcome! Thanks for the great work!😉
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Aaaaw
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Excellent. The last line brilliant!!
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Smiling. Humbled and thrilled by your generous praise. Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts.
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You’re welcome
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EGADS! What a fantastic gown.
Clever that you kept your perfect poem so simple in the face of this masterpiece.
Fabulous, Lonely, just fab!!!
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My dear, I posted this and thought of you. Isn’t thst gown amazing. I knew you would like it.
Laughing. I wanted the poem to be simple and a bit elegant to try to match that gown.
Thank you
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You did perfect! I adore the poem, and it works so well with the gown.
P.S. TY for thinking about me!!! ❦
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My pleasure. You are talented, beautiful, and a great art critic.
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BLUSH!!!! But if you insist! 🙃😘
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LOL
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❦
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xo
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Beautiful!
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Thank you so much for reading. Appreciate your kindness
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You are welcome!
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Beautiful!
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So glad that you think so.
Thank you for reading and for your comment.
I am grateful for your kindness.
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Your words are drenched in the perfume of love.Every word is fragrant❤
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What an amazing and poetic comment. Thank you for sharing the beauty of your words.
Thrilled you liked this. Flattered by your lovely imprint. Thank you.
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The lines “You are a garden of fantasies, An arrangement of dreams” I just love. This was a brilliantly vivid poem, alive with love.
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Humbled by your beautiful words. Thank you so much for your appreciation. Really makes me happy that you liked it. Thank you.
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You’re more than welcome.
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The crescendo of a sigh – incredible way of using words – I thought. And then the entire poem became an incredible feeling and experience.
You
you make poetry
into a feeling
and an experience
a beautiful one.
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Humbled by your beautiful words. So hjappy you liked this. And very touched by your comment. Thank you for your kindness. It means a lot.
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You are very welcome!
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So delicately woven. The words have a softness which reflects the grace of the lady.
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You made me smile with the elegant comment. Delighted and grateful you appreciate my little poem. Thank you for the kind read and beautiful words. I am full of appreciation. Thhanks.
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The pleasure is absolutely mine. You words are really profound and it is a delight to read your beautiful poetry. I am glad my words made you smile. Keep smiling and stay blessed.
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Thank you. Wish you all the best and infinite inspiration
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Thank you so much for your asupport Chuck. Greatly appreciated.
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Really a great post, Drew!! Loved the descriptive imagery in your words!!
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Grateful for yur kind words and support. Thank you my friend.
You are so kind.
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Beautiful words!!
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Thank you Alexa. So happy that you think so. Appreciate your kind words.
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Hope its been a good week for you!
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A great week so far, just very busy. Tomorrow I fly to the sunshine state. Can’t wait.
Be well Alexa.
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You. Are a masterful lover of words and beauty.
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And Miriam you are so sweet and kind and generous with your words.
You touched my lonely heart. Thank you so much.
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You’re always welcome ❤️
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You take simple words and weave them into a beautiful melody.
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Thank you for your kind words Diana. Appreciate your lovely read and comment.
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You’re most welcome!
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beautiful. as usual.
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Very happy that you think so my friend. Appreciate our kind words. Grteat to hear from you. How are you doing?
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im good. busy with life and tired. but lifes good. 🙂
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That is good. I hope it stays that way for you
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how r u
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Can’t complain. I am good. Preparing for a trip to Florida. Going to try to relocate. Had enough of these winters
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oh wow thats a good idea. you’ll be close to disney world. i bet some good stories could come from there 😉
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I certaintly hope so. Thanks my friend. Be well.
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thank u! i hope u r happy.
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I am right now. Thank you.
Wish you all the happiness the world has to offer.
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wow thanks. most people dont say that. thanks
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Excellent piece.
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Appreciate that. Thank you for reading and for your words. Hope you are well.
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Very nice very lovely. My day was well spent and although being locked out of my motel while it was still dark outside, I talked to a lot of people today. With the buses and walking around, I can say I sufficiently wore myself out. But to wake up to the poem was a beautiful ending to a lovely day. Thanks for posting it. And I’m so so wore out that I can scarcely keep my eyes open even after a nap!
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So very happy you enjoyed my poem. Delighted and grateful you took the time out to read it and share your thoughts. Hope you had a lovely day. Thank you.
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this leaks with so much much much love. the phrases are too delicious!
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Thrilled that you think so. Thank you for your beautiful words. Happy you appreciated this little thing.
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Haha. Okay. This poem is little also! 😀 and you’re welcome!
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Beyond beautiful! You are so talented with your words!! 😊
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Humbled and thrilled by your beautiful praise. Thank you so much for your appreciation.
Happy you liked this. Maded even happier by your words. Thank you so much.
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Lovin’ this. Wonderful metaphors, they really pop. Simply beautiful piece. Nice write!
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Very happy that you appreciated my poem. Thank you for reading and for your lovely words. I am grateful.
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
LOVE POEM EXTRAORDINAIRE
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That is so very kind of you to say that John. Happy you enjoyed it.
And flattered by the kind gesture of the reblog. Thank you very much for sharing.
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WHAT are friends for?
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Smiling
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I think the “you ” in your poem is very beautiful!! 😊😊🖤
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Very grateful that you do. all women are this beautiful.
Thank you for taking the time out to read and comment.
I appreciate your sharing your beautiful thoughts.
Thank you.
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Yes every women is beautiful! 😊
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😊
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Beautiful imagery with such elegant form!
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Grateful for your kind words. So happy that you liked this. Thank you for your read and comment. It is appreciated.
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My pleasure! 🙂
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… You are my Sweet Aubade. 💐
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That is such a beautiful thing to say. Thank you so much for your kindness.
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Oh my my my I so so so love this Andrew. I was just telling mister brain freeze while i was talking to him over the phone right now to read this poem . I so wish i could write like you . This was absolutely beautiful , no other words ❤️❤️❤️😍
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Sona this is one of the most beautiful comments I have ever received. I am so touched.
You and Roy have been wonderful supporters. And the two of you have often lifted my
spirits during times when I so needed it. For that I will always be grateful.
Thankl you for these beautiful words. They mean so much.
Apologies for my late response. Thank you.
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Reblogged this on Romantic Love Poems- Words from Heart and commented:
Such a beautiful beautiful poem❤️
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Sona, thank you so much for the reblog. You are always so sweet and kind.
I am touched by your warm gesture of support. Thank you so much.,
And apologies for the late response.
Thank you.
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The crescendo of a sigh, The reason that I breathe!! Two breath taking statements indeed that leaves one waiting to exhale my friend. I love the arrangement of dreams also, the words you choose to put together in this garden of graciousness is incredible and to describe someone in such a light can illuminate the heart and soul my friend. Amazing work indeed!🌹🌹
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Humbled by your words Roy. I have been working so hard to be very selective over every single word I choose.
So your words make me so happy. Your comments are always a thrill.
Apologies for all of my late replies. Tonight, I finally caught up with my messages.
Be well my friend.
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I can tell you are selective, careful and to the heart with your words because they touch people my dear friend, your art is always a gift to receive.
No apologies needed for the late replies my friend, your responded and that’s what matters. You may be late but you are worth the wait my friend. Be well.🌹
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You are killing me with kindness. Be well
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😊
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“The crescendo of a sigh”
Oh my, my, my!
Thank God for your poetry – it adds to reasons for living life!
There are lines in this that are poetry in themselves. Magical, Mesmerising!
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Isha you know how to humble this man with your gorgeous praise.
Thrilled you liked this poem and grateful for your kind words.
Thank you for being you.
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I love it
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I am grateful that you do. Thank you so much for taking the time out to read and leave your lovely comment.
I appreciate it.
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How beautiful and romantic.. touches me to the core of my heart 😊
“The scent of poetry..”
Makes me smile
Great write 😊
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I was feeling verey romantic that day.
Glad you enjoyed this. Every woman should hear words like this.
Thank you for your beautiful words. They mean so much.
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Yes😀
I agree – words for the heart 💕
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That first line…damn brilliant. That’s the stuff of earnest love shared between two souls before evil’s shadow finds them to drive them apart.
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Grateful and blushing after reading your beautiful praise. So happy that you saw
any beauty in this poem. Thank you for your wonderful words.
They touched me. Thanks.
Enjoy the rest of your weekend.
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And may you enjoy yours! xxxxx
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Appreciate it
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Hi. Please check out my blog 😊
https://themohmysblog.wordpress.com
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I have been away and have missed so much. Your news is so happy and I’m happy for you. It’s so good to read your poetry again. Happy Belated Birthday. Yours isn’t far from mine. Aries are awesome people. Every person in my household is an Aries. We have some interesting and firey conversations sometimes and everyone has an opinion. *smile* This poem is lovely. I know this is a chatty comment but I have only come back to several posts. Feel free to read and delete it. Best always, dear Drew. ♥.
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Not aq chatty cmment at all. Always happy to chat with an angel.
Hope you had a great birthday. Mine was wonderful.
Always wishing you all the best. xoxo
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{{{Andrew}}} Such a lovely comment. Thank you! ♥.
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Lucky you had a passionate first kiss – all I received was too much of just too much! 😪
This one has all the pretty pink vibes of a fairytale. I love it.
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LOL . Too funny.
A fairytale. I like that. Beautiful description.
You are generous with your words.
Thank you so much for the way you read and follow me.
I am humbled and grateful.
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so so so beautiful, love it!
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Grateful that you do. Thank you for taking the time out to read and leave your beautiful comment.
I appreciate your kindness.
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Damn! This touches beyond my soul you just get better and better
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Wow, I don’t know what to say. This comment humbles me.
Thank you.
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you know , this one is almost as magical as…that other Most Magical Poem Ever
🔥💕
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Oh oh oh .. sigh sigh 😔 you write ….
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My dear, you always find a way to make my heart smile.
Always grateful for your kind words.
🌹
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It’s good to see you smile, Drew.
Hey, am smiling too , heart and all.
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That is wonderful Yassy. 🌹
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You take good care. 🌺
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I will.
I shall return to read your beautiful, inspiring poetry. 🌹
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Pain goes in , love comes out.
Ciao. Till then..
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You are inspiring. Smiles
Ciao
‘Til then……
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Most lovely lines with a lovely image,dear dew!!🌹
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Grateful for your mind read and words Aruna.
Always appreciate your thoughts.
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Have you read my some poems?you have no time,dew!!left them.
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