do dreams really come true
they say the waves never stop
caressing your footprints
with a white dance
of pirouetting ocean foam
the breeze whispers your name
through trembling palm leaves
as coconuts gently fall
constructing our love hut of a home
the moon told me
she has never seen anything
as brilliant as your eyes
your adoring eyes
she suggests I make our chats endless
by squeezing the entire beach
into a sun dial
as immense as the sun rise
oh, to taste an orange sunset
with you my pet
as we swing in a hammock
made just for two
listen to the island sing a song
encouraging me
to stop fantasizing and ask
my love
do dreams really come true
Dreams do come true to those who have something to consistently dream about.
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Smiling. I like to think that dreams can come true for everyone who dreams and dares reach for that dream. But I am a silly romantic anyway.
Thank you for taking the time to read and share your thoughts. I appreciate the kind gesture. Thank you so much.
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This is so beautiful ❤️……..do dreams really come true …..I’d like to know that too
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Smiling. Happy that you liked this. Thank you for reading.
Do dreams come true? I truly hope all of your do.
Thank you.
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Awww I hope yours come true too 😊❤️. It’s always a pleasure reading you
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Thank you for your kind words and wishes. xo
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It’s been a minute since you’ve posted. This is really beautiful.
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Yes, it has. I have been on vacation for the past four weeks. So, I have only been posting once a week. Thank you for noticing. And thank you for reading and sharing your lovely thoughts. I appreciate it.
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Yes, they do! 😉
Beautifully penned!❤️❤️
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Smiling. I like to think so too.
Thank you very much for reading and sharing your thoughts. Your words made me smile. Appreciate it.
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Speechless, yet again.. 🤐 .. lol.. 😉😆
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You are too sweet. Thank you for sharing your sppechless thoughts. I truly appreciate them. Thank you.
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Pleasure mine.. 👍🏼😇
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Yes they certainly do … True 😎
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So happy you chimed in with your opinion on the subject, kind Sir.
Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts.
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My pleasure, Lonesome Author 😎
Hope you had a whale of a time
on your high sea siesta 🐳
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Sure did. Thank you. Already thinking of the next siesta.
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The moon gives you great advice, lovely.
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Smiling. The moon often gives good advice. And a time piece that can slow down time would be a wonderful thing to have.
Happy you shared your thoughts. Thank you so much.
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Oh the things we could do if we were able to slow down time, stretching out moments luxuriously. Stretching out the time spent while dreams are becoming true, drinking orange sunsets perhaps. Beautiful poem.
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That is exactly what I was thinking. If oly I could extend the moments I want to lengthen. That would be so sweet.
Drinking orange sunsets would be a great reasons to stretch out time especially if you are with that special someone.
Thank you for sharing your lovely thoughts. They made me smile. Thanks for your support.
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Agreed, this would truly be a dream come true. Reading this poem a second time made me realize even more beauty in it. I love it when that happens.
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What a gorgeous thing to say. Thank you.
Yes, it would be a dream come true.
I cling to the hope…..
Thank you so much
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Dream on, it may come true.
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Grateful for the encouragement. Thank you so much my friend.
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You are most welcome (as long as you keep on sharing beautiful verses 😊).
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Very kind of you.
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This is lovely! “the waves never stop caressing your footprints” I love this line!
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Smiling. So happy you liked that line. It was my favorite line as well.
Grateful for your kind read and thoughts. Thank you so much.
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I really enjoyed reading this Sire!🌸
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I am flattered that you do. Thank you so much for taking the time out to read and leave your lovely comment. Your efforts are appreciated.
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😊🌸
My pleasure.
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Beautiful. Yes dreams can come true but maybe they can be short lived.
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Quietly smiling. I like to think that dreams can come true, but then again, I am a dreamer.
Thank you for taking the time out to read and share your thoughts on my poem. You made me happy with your words. Appreciate it.
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What a beautiful poem, Andrew. Sensual and romantic.
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Sharon, thank you for your lovely words. Grateful for your comment. Thank you.
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Sigh sigh sigh SIGH.
Yes❤️
(I’m answering a number of questions there)
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LOL
I thought there was only one question in the poem. Please enlighten me oh Fiery one.
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Nope.
🙊❤️
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Laughing so hard. xo
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Me too lol.
Maybe one day
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So many beautiful lines in this…a poem to dream on.
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Grateful that you think so. Very flattered too. Thank you for your lovely comment. I appreciate your kindness.
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Its really just appreciation of your beautiful writing 🤗
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Grateful
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The dream is the first step towards success. Beautifully penned 💎💎
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Beautiful comment. That is so true. So, perhaps, I should take that first step…….
Thank you for reading and for your encouraging words. I truly appreciate your visit.
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It’s my pleasure always 🙋💐
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I believe they do! Lovely post 💕
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Happy you liked my poem. Grateful that you shared your thoughts. Thank you so much for reading and commenting. I appreciate it.
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Reblogged this on anita dawes and jaye marie.
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Thank you so much for the reblog. Humbled by your kind gesture.
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Dreams seem to come true for some people, are the rest of us having the wrong dreams?
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Oh, I wish everyone had the right dreams. Dreams are what makes life worthwhile.
Thank you for reading. Grateful for your deep thoughts. Appreciate evetything about you. Thank you.
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Aaww, shucks…
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Smiling. Thanks
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A constant question we all are asking ourselves 🙂 beautiful poetry 🙂
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Happy that you think so. Grateful you shared your thoughts. Flattered you liked my work. Thank you.
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🙂 Its always a pleasure reading you buddy 🙂
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Aaaaw thanks for saying that
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😊😊
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Reblogged this on Ace Friends & Bloggers News.
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Thanks so much for the reblog Ian.
I am finally back home from holiday and catching up on comments.
Thanks my good friend.
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Hope it was relaxing ……always good friend
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Yes, it was. Thanks.
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Dear Andrew, My friend and wordsmith of love …. Your ❤️ Is looking out into the world more and more and as it does it searches for the truth …dreams come true when you least expect it l was taught by my father in heaven one day when l read this ….This popular text is based in Christian beliefs and describes an experience in which a person is walking on a beach with God. They leave two sets of footprints in the sand. The tracks represent stages of the speaker’s life. The two trails dwindle to one, especially at the lowest and most hopeless moments of the person’s life. When questioning God, believing that the Lord must have abandoned his love during those times, God gives the explanation, “During your times of trial and suffering, when you see only one set of footprints, it was then that I carried you.” …. here is a dream really worth believing will and has and does come true daily …. 🙏’s its found in you and when it does you will fly like an angel 😇
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Dreams do come true when we least expect it. And I know our Lord has a wonderful surprise for me.
His plans are always better than ours.
Thank you for your lovely words and support.
I am grateful for your friendship Ian.
Thank you for everything.
And apologies for my late response. Life has been a challenge.
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Caressing the feet and the tasting the sunset are strong senses. Meanwhile, I think something in the DR sparked this post. 🙂 … Well done, Drew!
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Frank, this island has my thoughts swimming
in all kinds of senses and emotions. It has been a wonderful experience. Very inspiring.
Thus, this entirte island sparked this post.
Thank you for your lovely comment.
It is appreciated. Be well my friend.
I will be back n NY for Aretha.
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Cheers to the inspiration!
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It depends on what is a ‘dream’ being defined…however, rarely.
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I am a hopless dreamers, so I like to think that everyone’s dreams can ceom true (although the realist inside me knows that is not possible).
Thank you for dsharing your thoughts. Very grateful for your words my friend.
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You are not a hopeless dreamer,dear dew!!your the coming muse is with you.❤
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You are very kind Aruna
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A lot of thanks,dear dew!!🌹🌹🌹🌹
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🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹
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Took me a little while but I came back.
I speak to the moon, too. I had no idea you two were so well acquainted, my Lonely Author. I won’t tell you what she tells me because it’s all terribly secret and hush hush. But I would suggest you keep listening.
I’ve enjoyed your island poetry, you know. It’s funny because I lived most of my life on an island with no real seasons, 9 months of scorching summer heat and then 3 months of an attempt at different seasons which actually kind of go: bit less hot, bit less hot still, kind of rainy and chilly, wintery-ish then back to scorching heat. I think because of that I never liked the heat or the summer or probably never truly appreciated where I was living because it was soo effing hot all the time and summer never really brought me anything good or happy so I think that cultivated a love for real seasons and wintery magic and stuff. Then you come along with your love of beaches and the sea and the palm trees and all that good stuff that I forgot that it can actually be beautiful and sensual and I think only you could have reignited my love for summer and the love and dreamy things that go with it. I am sharing all this useless info here because your poem made me think of all that and so many other things.
Definitely my favourite of your island poetry. Actually it felt like the first stanza was a summary of the poetry you’ve written since you’ve been away. Could have been a stand alone poem but obviously you had more to say, that was clear. “Caressing” is the perfect word to get my attention. Then needless you say, you held that attention.
The beautiful personification of the waves, “a white dance
of pirouetting ocean foam…” and the whispering breeze and trembling (love that word) palm leaves and the love hut. ..all of that made me smile. Love hut.. I can picture it so clearly.
The second stanza…oh my gosh. Don’t know where to start. The LOVE is tangible, visible, beautiful. The moon and the eyes..and trying or wishing that we could control precious time when it seems to do whatever it wants when we don’t want it to. So inspired and such amazing imagery of a sundial…I LOVE that. And much more powerful that you’re saying these words as if whispering the poem in her ear.
And because this is already becoming very difficult for me to express my appreciation and love for your poem, I’ll just say that the whole poem was so creative and inspired, so sweet and gentle, so full of rich imagery that could sweep anyone away into a dream of true love and warm sunkissed days, such a wonderful feast for the senses and that last stanza was romance, intimacy (that little ‘my pet’ …oh my gosh, heart melting and so personal) love and forever all in a few lines and you can guess, I am sure my most favourite line.
Your,
Fiery
♥
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A vivid love note Drew, a beautiful poem my friend.
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Smiling. Happy you think so Ash. Thank you for your kind encrouraging words.
They are appreciated.
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You’re very welcome Drew
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I’d like to believe dreams come true. 🙂 Otherwise I’ve spent an awful lot of time planning something not real lol. Beautiful words – it has me counting down until I get to enjoy a day at the beach in the midst of summer.
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Oh LauraJ I finally had a chance to sit down and reply to old messages that had accumulated on me.
Thank you for your gorgeous words. They are truly appreciated.
As for dreams….you are such an elegant and sweet lady. I hope everyone of your dreams come true.
Thank you
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Thank you Andrew! This brought a smile to my face 🙂
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Catching up on fellow blog posts and wanted to let you know how much I’m enjoying yours – you have a true gift for words – may you be blessed – Lois
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bello escrito!!
saludos
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Muchisimas gracias Amigo.
Cuidate
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So lovely! Are you back to reality yet?
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Back to reality? Haha . Was I ever there?
Back in NY yes.
Thank you for your lovely words. xo
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Haha, it did sound like a comment on your mental health didn’t it?
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Laughing. Oh, I just wanted to make sure we were clear on my little travels in and out of reality. LOL
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Writers must, I think!
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Smiling. Yes, we do.
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Dreams really do come true. A lovely read!
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I agree with you Winnie. Thank you for your read and lovely words. They made me smile like they always do.
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You’re welcome, Drew! Your reply made me smile too.
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I sure hope so 💜 This poem reads like a daydream!
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Beautiful comment. Thank you so much. I am grateful for your words.
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This time I can’t decide which are my favorite lines because they are all so exquisitely beautiful.
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You are so kind. Flattered by your wonderful comment. Thank you so much. I truly appreciate it.
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Goodness, this is so beautiful! 💖 And just to put in my vote, dreams most definitely come true!
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Humbled and grateful for your amazing comment. So happy you liked this. And your vote is noted.
exactly like mine. I do believe in dreams.
Thank you for your wonderful comment.
I hope all of your dreams come true.
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Dear Romantic Lonely,
Of course dreams come true! Every poem you pen is a dream come true.
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Romantic Lonely……LOL
What a gorgeous and humbling comment.
Aaaaaw
Thank you so much Resa. You are a dream.
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I just loved the way you wrote this poem…just soo beautiful 🌹
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Grateful that you enjoyed this. And so flattered by your beautiful words.
Thank you so much for being you. So kind, gentle, and always inspiring.
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I can’t answer the question, as my dreams have gone missing or fallow. Your poem, however, is fun and fanciful, a touching tribute to love and island life. It seems you’ve gone native Drew. 🙂
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Haha . Native until I returned back to the cold dreariness of New York City.
Happy you enjoyed this. Thank you dor the lovely words and support.
It is appreciated.
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You’re welcome.
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What a stellar poem – loved the way you said the moon expressing her beauty 😊🌸
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Happy you think so. Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts my friend. Appreciate it.
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My absolute pleasure
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Chuck you are wonderful, kind, supportive, and an angel.
Thank you for all of your wonderful support.
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Truly beautiful!
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Happy you think so. Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts. You are always so kind to me. Appreciate it.
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To taste an orange sunset would be a great spice to this dream.
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LOL . Oh, this orange sunsets are absolutely gorgeous and quite inspiring.
Thank you so much for your sharing your lovely thoughts.
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Beautiful, as usual… 🌹🌹
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Grateful that you think so. Thank you so much for your kindness
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So beautiful! You’re amazing 🙈💖
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Grateful and flattered by your wonderful words. You are kind and generous with your comments.
Thank you for your visit, read, and thoughts. Appreciate it.
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My pleasure always 😇
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dreamy the first time i read it and so glad you bring it back to my attention how wonderful dreams are, gorgeous words and images
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You are very kind. Flattered by your words, happy you liked this.
Dreaming is a wonderful part of life. My heart reminds me all of the time.
Thanks for your lovely words and thoughts. I appreciate it.
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You are most welcome. My pleasure
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This is so serene and reads like a gentle breeze (just my feelings when I read it). I’d like to hope dreams come true, even if a bigger part of me doesn’t think they do, I’m reserving a small part of myself that has hope 🙂
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Happy you enjoyed this. To the small part of you reserved to have hope; not all of our dreams can come true. Life just doesn’t work that way.
But some of our dreams or hopes can become reality. At least my helpless and hopeless heart likes to think so.
Thank you for sharing your lovely thoughts. Glad you liked my poem. And flattered by your words. Thank you so much.
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you had me at the word pirouette! (former ballet dancer loves ballet references:))
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Grateful for your kind words. So happy you enjoyed this little poem. Thanks for reading and sharing your wonderful thoughts.
Your visits are appreciated
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you are so very welcome:)
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Omg , I must have read this post so so so so so many times . absolutely absolutely absolutely love it
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You are so sweet Ms. Sparkles. Humbled by your beautiful comment. Thrilled and flattered by your words. Thank you.
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Reblogged this on Romantic Love Poems- Words from Heart.
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Grateful and flattered that you think this was worthy of reblogging Sona.
Truly appreciate yourt kind gesture of support. Thank you so much.
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I had a dream this morning, that my purse was stolen, so lets hope that some dreams never come true! Have a great weekend!
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Oh my. well, in this case I hope that dream didn’t come true Alexa. Did it? I hope not.
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Not unless you count leaving it in my car, when I dropped it off at the shop for service. Though I called and they kept it safe.
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Wow. Happy it wasn’t lost. Please be careful.
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Thank you. Hope you’re feeling better?
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Much better Alexa. Thank you. Now, I am setting my mind on my relocation to The Sunshine State.
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The sun is beaming these days 🙂
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Be in Orlando area in early April. Can’t wait.
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Held me from start to end. The lovely imagery in the beginning and then the deepening of emotions and finally the sweet longing yet the uncertainty. Ahh, all so well weaved.
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Thrilled and grateful for your amazing comment. Your little breakdown humbles me.
Thank you for taking the time out to read and leave such a great comment.
I appreciate your kindness and effort my friend.
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My pleasure. Have a good time
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This is so beautiful! I have to say It just hit my favorite of all time!
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Very grateful for your kind words. Happy you think is one of my best.
Thnak you for your wonderful support and sweet kindness.
It is greatly appreciated.
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